Writing Challenge #9
Hi everyone. The second-last participant in this creative writing challenge is Joy from Unfolding Your Path to Joy.
In Joy’s version of these nine words, she tells a cute story of young romance; yet another flavour we haven’t seen. There are matters of the heart here, both in her creative writing and in her process for this challenge.
Joy shares some words of wisdom about her process:
I try not to label myself, but I would say I am “not a fiction writer”. Just because I would say that I thought I should try.
What I truly believe is that I *am* anything I allow myself to be and the moment I decide to “try” is the moment a shift occurs throughout all areas of my life. I embrace that thoroughly and am always excited to see how the momentum from even one tiny step forward in one simple area such as this, enriches my life in delight-filled ways.
When I allow my heart to be open to the moment as it is, then *anything* truly is possible. To allow my heart to open fully, I savor all that is familiar to me and brings me joy; yet I also stretch to try new and different. I find when I try new and different in one area, all areas of my life are open. Participating in this challenge was new and different for me, because I don’t think of myself as a fiction writer and I find it difficult to write with constraints – in this case incorporating a specific set of nine words into a 100-word story. I opened my heart and I did it, and *the doing of it* is the best reward. It allows me to consider what else is possible if I just open my heart and try.
Butterflies and Glitter
When I was 7 – and wearing my butterflies and glitter headband – I told Timothy “you’re my boyfriend”, then kissed him. That year, he moved.
When I was 12, standing with Jerome and Rena – wearing my butterflies and glitter headband; “Hi, Joy.”
Timothy! I felt my heart swell – two small words, the magnitude of which sent my spirit soaring. If I could fly, I would have touched the moon.
I could barely concentrate in typography class.
Class ended. I ran right into the open closet door, knocking me to the floor.
The slow death of embarrassment.
Timothy offered his hand.
* * * * * * * *
This is precious, Joy. Soulful. Thank you.
There’s such an endearing quality about your writing and your story, reflected by how you opened yourself to the creative process. I love how you say “the doing of it is the best reward”. It leads me to believe you were fearless, despite this being your first time writing fiction. You just let it unfold.
Here there is young love, a good-bye and then a reunion. I love the promise of what is to come after Timothy offers his hand to the writer. Interesting that the writer is, in a sense, a mystery character who remains nameless. :-)





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It is just so REAL and makes you feel what she is feeling. Wonderful writing.
Hi Davina .. as you say a completely different take on those 9 words .. and Joy .. I echo what Vered says .. a story of wonderment .. a story we can all relate to .. and probably had similar things happen to us – wish mine had been as beautiful!
Lovely story and what a great series .. now yours Davina ..?
Have a good few days .. Hilary
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Hi Davina,
Thank you for such a kind introduction!
Hi vered,
Thank you! I’m working on manifesting *love*; this story is just one tiny step:)
Hi Hilary,
I thought it amazing and fun how different each story was!
I think how incredibly talented everyone is who contributes to this blog and Sara’s blog…and one day if I keep practicing, I hope to be at that caliber.. I love learning from everyone!
Much peace,
Joy
Joy,
This is fun, stuff I find you so creative.
.-= Tess The Bold Life´s last blog ..Feeling Jealous Shine Your Light On It… =-.
Hi Joy and Davina
Woo-hoo! Nothing like a beautiful and innocent love story – I just love it Joy!
And you are right – we can be anything we choose, we can be anything and there is nothing we are not.
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I promised myself I would not blog today. I had to turn on the computer to work on bills and research health care issues; I only have one more day to finish this course I am taking, I do not usually procrastinate like I have this time…
One part of the class did not download….I wrote to the company and it took quite awhile to get that segment to finally work….I got my CSA box…and I just knew I had to at least check out the titles on the e-reader….OH another story…and a love story…ah
Wonderful…your words were delightful, and your process reminds me to keep on trying and shifting my energy…
Ah……sigh a love story so well written and sweet…
Thank you both…this was just what I needed to read…
Vered,
I agree. This story was easy to connect with.
Hilary,
I’ve never been reunited with a crush, but I was given flowers from a secret admirer that I later ended up dating for 3 months :) There’s one more last-minute entry to come from Jannie on Friday. I’ll be publishing my version on Sunday.
Joy.
You’re welcome! :-) I happy to be hosting your writing. You did a beautiful job.
Tess,
Me too.
Hi Evita.
Romance… yum! :)
Patricia,
Blame it on the weather — the procrastination. Sounds like you needed a read like this to spice up your day. :) Yuck — those technical glitches; especially frustrating when you are so close to finishing your project. Good luck with the rest of it.
Well that was fun, and very new & different from the “Joy” I’m used to reading. Like you, I don’t consider myself a fiction writer, so I bet this would have challenged me similarly. Not sure I could have risen to the challenge like you did, though, butterflies & glitter girl!
Lots of love!
Aaawww… Timothy is the perfect gentleman! His impeccable manners and thoughtfulness would turn my head if I were that way inclined. :P
Fab story, Joy. :D
Joy, this is an adorable love story. A perfect addition to collection of interesting stories presented here.
Hi Megan,
Thanks for stopping by. You never know… you might surprise yourself :-)
Tony,
I know eh? A true gentleman — it takes one to know one :-)
Linda,
I agree. A perfect addition to this collection. I adore the picture, too.
I am so impressed with everyone’s different take with these nine words.
Beautiful story, Joy
Jim,
I agree; Joy told a beautiful story. Stories with happy endings are my favourite.
Hi Davina,
As I was reading this, I realized there were two messages here. That which Joy shared in her process, and then her story. I was so intrigued by what she wrote, “What I truly believe is that I *am* anything I allow myself to be and the moment I decide to “try” is the moment a shift occurs throughout all areas of my life.”, I had to read the story twice.
Beautiful, Joy!
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Barbara,
Very interesting…. you’re right, there are two messages here. I loved reading about Joy’s process too. It makes me think about how she allows a certain something to unfold; trusting for the best to come. And in her story, that is exactly what happened.
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